Last Breath

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  • Lost Love

    Last Breath

    Last Breath




    Why did I leave you to go on my own…


    You gave me love, you gave me a home…


    I was too stubborn, just too blind to see…


    All a woman could want, was what you offered me…


    I took you for granted, that was my mistake…


    I was foolish enough to think…you would wait…


    You went on with the rest of your life…


    You chose another to become your wife…


    I'll know I'll stop loving you

    this day I can see…


    It's when the last breath comes from me…

    And I'll no longer be…


    Jeannie Glisson

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    orangepony commented on Last Breath

    08-18-2009

    Wow,Its a life lesson to learn from,you have put so tenderly, thats its a wounderful poem, i know that you cannot take life or body for granted, since i have a medical reason that keep me from working.

    jeannie1g

    08/19/2009

    I'm glad you have enjoyed my poems .I need to post more. I will work on it I have many many more that I have written..Than you again.I hope things are better for you.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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