Last Goodbye

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    Last Goodbye

    DON'T KNOW WHY WE SAID GOODBYESEEMS TO ME WE COULD HAVE BEEN NOE GREAT PAIRIF WE SO DARIEDWISHING I COULD PICK UP THAT PHONE OVER THEREJUST SHOULD HAVE KNOWENI WOULD END UP ALONELEARNING TO LIVE LIFE THE BEST I KNOW HOW AFTER WE THROW IN THE TOWLTHIS PAIN HERE IN MY HEART AND SOAL JUST SEEMS TO BE TO MUCH TO BARETIME WAS NOT BEING A FRIEND IN THE ENDCOULD I HAVE DONE IT ALL WRONG?WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO TAKE SO LONGCOULD THIS ALL BE A BAD DREAM COULD WE JUST LET OF SOME STEAM?NOTHING I CAN DO EVERYTHING REMINDS ME OF YOU

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    dahlusion commented on Last Goodbye

    09-10-2009

    A deeply beautiful lament for the one you love; moving and heart felt.

    HarverTomsson commented on Last Goodbye

    04-06-2009

    Bleeding impulses need gentle bridles lest they drain the heart of all warmth. I am waiting to see you get to a new "Hello." Sadder, wiser, and a better lover, for the pain you have endured.

    shadowexpler

    08/18/2009

    wow i love the way you wote that nice

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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