LAW'D KNO'S I'Z TRYD

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    LAW'D KNO'S I'Z TRYD

    TRYD TO B A GOOD WIF
    TRYD TO B DA BES I CUD B
    WAAS'ED YA CLOSE, FISSED YA SUPPA
    I'ND YA CLOSE -RAYS'D YA KIDZ
    STEEL WASN GOO- NUFF FA U
    KALLED ME STUPET.........
    TOED ME WIT ME... YA HAD NO LIF

    GO ON LIEVE ME
    I'Z GONA B ALWITE
    MY CHILLEN IN SKOOL
    DEY TESCH ME SOMTIN
    I'Z MITE E-VN TRI SKOOL FO MYSEF
    THE WELFAIR PEPO HEP ME OUT
    IMA GIT MY G E D

    NES TYME YA SEE ME I'Z B TESCH'N YU
    A TING OR TO......
    I AINT AWAIZ GONA B STUPET
    I'Z GONA SEE YU ON THA SKREET
    WITH NO FOOD TO EAT
    NO SHOES ON YOUR FEET
    THAT'S WHEN YOU'LL FEEL MY HEAT

    I'LL BE EDUCATED
    BE DONE GRADUATED
    TOP OF MY CLASS
    LOOKING AT YOUR ASS
    WALK DOWN THE STREET
    GUCCI SHOES ON MY FEET
    WITH PRIDE
    IN MY STRIDE

    YOU'LL BE SAYING DAMN
    LET ME GET YOUR NUMBER MAM
    WITH A CHUCKLE BENEATH MY BREATH
    I'LL SMILE...AT THE SAME TIME REMIND MYSELF
    HOW I USE TO LOVE YOU SO MUCH
    UNTIL THE DAY YOU SAID I WAS NOT ENOUGH
    AND YOU'LL STILL BE SAYING DAMN

    MY SPEECH WILL BE DIFFERENT
    MY SPELLING TOO
    I'M GOING TO BE ALL RIGHT
    GET ME A HOUSE AND STOP PAYING RENT
    OH YEAH..,EVERYTHING ABOUT ME WILL BE NEW
    SO TODAY...I WILL PUT UP NO FIGHT
    BECAUSE IN THE END.....
    LORD KNOWS I TRIED

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    cmlestrade commented on LAW'D KNO'S I'Z TRYD

    08-12-2009

    Bravo, this was terrific. You show a complete metamophosis in this one. A wonderful read.

    edhrush

    08/12/2009

    Thank you so much for your input. I enjoy reading what others have to say about my works.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    edhrush’s Poems (15)

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    DANGER ZONE 0
    BUTT NAKED 3
    WINDOW SHOPPING 0
    FINISHED 0
    LOVE CHANGES 0
    MY INSPIRATION 0
    HOME 0
    USED AND ABUSED 0
    WET 2
    FREE TO BE ME 0
    VOICES 0
    IT HAS ALWAYS BEEN YOU 0
    TRUE LOVE 2