LAZY RAINY DAYS

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    my new love poem i would love to find my rainy day man. hope you enjoy

    LAZY RAINY DAYS


    Lazy rainy days nothing to do
    nowhere to go.Stay with me
    here in our bed.Let the rain
    pour all day.
    Run your fingers up and
    down my back.Let the closeness
    of our bodies erase all the worries
    of the world away.
    Let me enjoy the beat of your
    heart beneath my cheek.after we
    have loved each other all day.And
    we lay here toughter all weak.
    Time can be our friend for now
    let get lost in this moment.
    Redisocvoving our forgotten pleasures
    until we are both content.
    We can make the most loving memories
    on this very rainy day.
    These will be ours and ours only
    the rain can never wash that love
    of ours away.

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    Rhymer commented on LAZY RAINY DAYS

    05-14-2010

    I enjoyed this read, a wonderful message of love. What better way to spend a rainy day. 10 from me.

    juliana47 commented on LAZY RAINY DAYS

    05-14-2010

    check out my poems on this read them hope everybody likes my new one rainy days oh and it would be nice if you voted for me ......hint hint lol enjoy let me know what you think hugs all thanks

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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