let it shine

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let it shine

let it shine on me im down here hurting
deserveing a blessing
just to stop stressing
to replenish the joy of livin
let it shine
even if i was blind
i wanna still see if fine
when its my time
and yours is subsidies
like they pull at V.C
wit they bs j.p
that puts me back where i started from
just a little less dumb
and here it comes
with persistants
fixin to work in somebodies kitchen
where they give ya
just enough to live
but not enough to get by
let it shine

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AngelaStylz78 commented on let it shine

07-08-2009

I like the way you write..Thanks again!!! Can't wait to read more.

syed commented on let it shine

01-27-2009

nice!!!!!!!!!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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