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    why

    sometimes my mind wonders why
    we were born to live to live to die
    so why should i
    give a fuck about livin
    if at an instant
    i could be on my mission
    out of here
    wit no fear of death
    my last breath
    awaits me should i care for what
    if it was'nt for bad luck
    i woulodnt have no luck at all
    it makes me fall
    to my knees
    ask tha lord please
    to forgive me
    for my sins
    wit a bottle of gin
    by my side is it wrong or right
    i cant deicide so why try

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    CatEyes commented on why

    07-07-2009

    I like your poem... Are the words supposed to be spelled wrong?

    ccslim commented on why

    02-02-2009

    Ever ask why? hehe great content and flow with the only hiccup in it's giddy up is the f bomb. Thumbs up!

    Melj710 commented on why

    01-27-2009

    I like this one It has a nice undercurrent. It's kinda deep on several levels. Great write

    syed commented on why

    01-27-2009

    u seem to be a lil confused like me ...LOL but the flow and the emotions were good!!!!

    Plot121 commented on why

    01-27-2009

    very emotionally charged and hard hitting but I think it was more one sided view of the world hmmm Robert...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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