Life Interupted

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  • Confusion

    Life Interupted
    Heart racing,
    Burning
    Pain searing
    Life I am not facing.

    Want to run
    Want to hide
    Don’t see the sun
    Trapped inside.

    Darkness surrounds
    Filled with fear
    Heart pounds
    Want to disappear

    Holding on
    Barely breathing
    Want to be gone
    In life, I’m not believing

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    CMarsh commented on Life Interupted

    09-27-2009

    Excellent poem the flow was great and very visual. I think this is my favorite so far.Perfect 10 from me.
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    Chrisjan commented on Life Interupted

    05-29-2009

    The creatitity in this poem is awesome. Touching all senses, to where the readers feels part of poem. That is "Good" ! Thanks for sharing.
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    lonewolf commented on Life Interupted

    04-14-2009

    i can relate to this. another great poem, very well done.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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