LIFE STORY pt1

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    LIFE STORY pt1


    Raised by my mother,
    Abadon by my father,
    So he could by a rock an get alittle higher,
    I could never hide my pain inside,
    Shown from the tears falling from my eyes,
    I'm from the eastside you either had to ride,
    Or in the streets your body would lie.

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    connsk8 commented on LIFE STORY pt1

    06-03-2009

    I've read all your work you had posted but this is the one I want to comment on. Your style says so much in so few words, I envy that...you have great passion inside, never stop feelig and writing, don't let life get you down, it does get better, good job...

    Gaia88

    06/05/2009

    thank you very much

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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