LIFE

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  • Michelle22
  • is just got out of class and tired but have to study for my first quiz.

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I HAVE ALOT OF DEEP POEMS BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN THROUGH ALOT OF BAD TIME. EVERYONE HAS SO HOPEFULLY THIS ONE COULD BE ONE TOO INSPIRE EVERYONE WHETHER THEY FEEL THE WAY I DO OR NOT!!!

LIFE

Broken and wounded,

Earth, wind and fire,

times are changing beyond compare,

never expected the hurt and broken hearted,

is there anyone in the world left with a care,

 I like to say im perfect but, im not,

never even thought that for one moment,

loosing people here and there,

will anyone take the pain away,

surrounded by people but yet so alone,

the love of my life is the only thing gold,

could mess it up at any minute,

or for once will my heart be spared,

lie after lie, prayer after prayer,

lost inside this world i hold so dear,

not wanting to be here anymore,

everyday i want to give up and figure my way out,

as the darkened clouds pass i wounder if this will be the day my prayer is answered,

then i look back at the real people who love me, the times weve shared,

wat we all have been through in different places different times,

not worth dying over anymore,

have to much to live for and too much in store,

'just stay strong and prove them wrong,

i dont know how much more i could bare,

the eye is in the beholder,

strength or weakness beyond the bend,

cross that mountain of roads ahead,

and set out to see where i begin,

journey worth the taking even worth some heart breaking,

if im not strong for me who else will be,

and if i let go and give up wat type of role model is that,

wat type of example would i be showing,

and what type of path would everyone else take along side of me,

listen to your heart and ur insticts,

I trust i am stronger then wat i believe, and move forward to that new begining in life that will hold the ups and downs,

pains and strives,

people can only put the blame so far onto someone else, after that its your choice to decide how ur going to have your life turn out,

sometimes u might want to run and hide,

but for the most part stick it out and see where u end up,

who knows u might find more then u ever could ask for or even imagine,

life isnt a game or race its just life.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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Michelle22’s Poems (5)

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LIFE 0
TO MY LOVE 0
LOVE OBSTICALES 0
JOURNEY 0
LOST UNDERGROUND 0