Lines of her lies

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    Lines of her lies
    Reading lines of her lies

    Eyes wide open

    Closed mind

    Words bleeding through my soul

    Streaming fantasies of that smile

    Distant picture of her thighs

    Her tongue spinning in my thoughts

    I cross fingers for those I hurt

    And trigger a raw reminiscence

    Me

    Lying in empty bed

    With no gun

    But hole in my head

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    CellarDoor commented on Lines of her lies

    03-04-2009

    Very powerful piece of work, I especially liked the line "Words bleeding through my soul" it was captivating!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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