Loosened Chains

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Loosened Chains

When winter fades away
The coldness of your words melt
Lonely Sakura petals become my tears
And Spring clears a path for me

The chains wrapped around me
Bringing me closer to insanity
Have come to a closing
And the rain washes away these scars

Your blue eyes may be captivating
Drowning in your deep abyss
Then lightning strikes above me
And the mist begins to lift

When winter fades away
And Spring clears a path for me
Listening to the voices of soft lyrics
I know your chains on me have loosen

And my World is right again

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MindNumbing commented on Loosened Chains

02-23-2010

I like this... the chains lend a very visual aspect... good job :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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