lost without you

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    lost without you
    Hold my hand in the morning
    And help me on my way
    For I am lost without you
    and don't know what to say

    My mind and heart are clouded
    And I'm not seeing to clear
    For I am lost without you
    And need to have you near

    Praying that you will touch me
    And hold me in your arms
    For I am lost without you
    and all your wonderful charms

    So please don't push the issue
    That I seem to be a wreck
    For I am lost without you
    On this long and lonesome trek

    It's like wakeing in the morning
    and knowing somethings wrong
    For I am lost without you
    And been without you far too long

    So tell me words I need to hear
    And help me to understand
    For I am lost without you
    and only just a man

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    tennessee commented on lost without you

    08-18-2009

    Sweet and heartfelt. I write in whatever form I please and you should continue to too..... lol.
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    nekosuave commented on lost without you

    07-02-2009

    to understand the way the mind and heart feels is a good trait to have wow you got it i really enjoyed this one alot
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    Elke commented on lost without you

    07-02-2009

    I think it's a beautiful poem. It's very smooth,-no wrinkes. It's actually the first Love tag poem I have really liked.
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    tomcrashwilson

    07/02/2009

    thank you you are to kind

    kalina commented on lost without you

    06-06-2009

    I liked the poem, but you need to be careful with spelling. (I can't help it, I'm a former teacher.) In line 6 "to" should be "too", in line 17 "wakeing" should be "waking", and in line 18 "somethings" should be something's (contraction for something is). At the end of a sentence or thought thee should also be a punctuation mark. Not only did I like the sentiment, I also liked the visual shape the poem presented--almost like a tear about to detach and fall.
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    tomcrashwilson

    07/02/2009

    I guess i need a Tacher thank you for your thoughts I do have a problem with that.

    wildcat691 commented on lost without you

    02-11-2009

    that poem was beautiful
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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