Love is what we make of it

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Love is what we make of it

Love is hope, love is the joy in what come for us and love is who we share it with love can be the best think in our lives. I write this because I have so much  love in my heart and the people in my life matter to me the most they depend on me a great deal of the time so I show them I care ,all the time that is love to me just to be the ear when there is a problem they have. I am the one who helps them out the most ...... Dad I now your around me all the time and I do still love you and miss you the most I am  never  going to forget you Love your your little girl always that will never Change ......Christina

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Minerva22 commented on Love is what we make of it

07-10-2009

That was so sweet and full of heart. One thing about poetry, that I hate, people are so stuck on technique that they forget that poetry is not only what you say and how you say it but you want ppl to feel what you say. Feel me?

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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