love you

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    love you

     I love the way you walk
    I love the way you say my name
    I love everything about you

    He loves the way she walks
    He loves the way she flips her hair
    He loves everything about her

    They love each other deeply
    But sadly neither see that
    Best friends soon to be lovers

    Never to say a word of it to anyone
    All because of the rejection from the world
    Two cant be together but belong together

    Your not living life to the fullest if people arent' talking about you
    You aren't enjoying life until you've tried everything
    You dont know it all til you've made all the mistakes

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    Louise commented on love you

    06-29-2009

    Good poem. I think that having a friendship first enhances the love connection that you will have. Your relationship shouldn't be based on what others think, but what is in your heart.
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    Crush commented on love you

    06-29-2009

    I like this...sometimes it confuses me but the last stanza kicks like horse. Thanks.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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