more then you know

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    more then you know

     The pain hurts more then you know
    My true feelings soon will show
    So go ahead and go

    I feel like those stitches are slowly coming loose
    Hurting both physically and emtionally
    The stitches are coming undone
    Sorta like our relationship

    You never knew how much you meant to me
    Maybe it's my fault maybe it's hers
    I just don't know anymore

    What I do know is where there was love and care
    Now lays hate and despair
    That poor little girl will take her forever leave

    She won't take your crap anymore
    She won't get attached again
    She won't open up because of you
    So know that you with her is your choice.........

    But does that mean that you hurting me was to?

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    baddollyr2 commented on more then you know

    06-30-2009

    this is good i like it, it reminds me of this anime i watch all the time and that girl is one of my fav. chars.
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    am2anangel commented on more then you know

    06-30-2009

    very well written you take your reader through this emotional turmoil. The feeling of being hurt and betrayed is strong. Well done.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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