Love

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    this is basically a poem about love, as you can most likely tell by the title. Enjoy!

    Love

    You are like are fallen petal from a flower.
    Your smile is like the bright full moon.
    Your laugh is like the fresh fallen snow.
    So gentle and soft.
    Everything about you is perfect
    In my very eyes, heart, mind, and soul.
    This is why I love you.
    You are like a star that shines brighter than any diamond.
    You are like a bright sun that brings warmth to my heart.
    You are like a flower, unique with your own beauty.
    You're also like a snowflake, so frail yet so beautiful.
    You are kind, loving, and gentle to all.
    You have your ups and downs,
    As do I.
    But no matter what happens in the future,
    I will always be by your side.
    Through tough times.
    Through sad times.
    Through all the times that you will go through.
    I will be with you.
    Now and always.
    I love you,
    And I always will.

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    TNTangel commented on Love

    06-25-2009

    Very pretty... good job! You really intend to hang in there no matter what... that is hard to find in these modern times:)

    PoetryLove77

    06/25/2009

    Thank you TNTangel for this wonderful comment!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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