love

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    love

    Love
    pure excitement
    thrill of the day
    skin tingling
    adrenalin pumping
    the one you love
    the one you just meet
    glimmer in your eye
    back to now
    love
    is a thing that you can not
    handle
    get a grip
    but i cant
    i love him
    no i don't
    yes i do
    well maybe a little
    maybe a lot
    yes a lot
    i love him and
    he loves me
    gone 
    the nest day
    sad
    angry
    oohh he is hot
    and well it starts all over
    i love love!!! 

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    stringer commented on love

    10-10-2009

    everything about this poet makes me want more something about her hunger makes me want to eat whatever she serves up

    1LostGypsy commented on love

    10-09-2009

    Very intense, and accurate. I like the way you portray the chaotic collage of random but reppetatively consistant emotions. I have one that shows the opposite angle of it in the same mannor. Its called "NO SUCH THING" - please check it out and let me know what you think sometime. ~LostGypsy PS You are absolutey gorgious!

    gallaxy commented on love

    09-12-2009

    You have given an acurate answer to the million dollar question. "?". The question is. What is love??? When asked around, people have different answers. What it is or what it should be. I find that your answer summarizes it the best without getting lenghthy. As they say in England, "Jolly Good Show". I look forward to your further writings. "Tuh Tuh"......

    DavidRayy commented on love

    08-14-2009

    NICE!!!............................................

    cmlestrade commented on love

    08-14-2009

    Very good write. captures how so many feel I enjoyed the descriptions of mixed up feelings

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