making my wish...

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making my wish...

i am closeing my eyes and making a wish...
hopefully you are too...
i wish that you where coming down the hill,
i open my eyes and there you are, walking like you always did.
i close my eyes again to make another,
i wish that you where close enough to hold me,
i open them and there you are with in arms length.
i close my eyes once again to make yet another wish,
i wish that you would take me in your arms and kiss me,
i open my eyes and i can taste your lips.
i whisper i love you with my eyes closed,
and i hear you whisper back i love you too,
i open them, and your not here.
a wish is just a dream unless it comes true.
i love you...

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optimistic commented on making my wish...

07-16-2009

A wish is like pure luck or just a dream, besides that this poem was great different writing style I like the flow in this poem.

meridith

07/16/2009

thank you.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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