Many Obstacles

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Many Obstacles


"We fall down and we get back up." But when times get rough. It seems like no one is there to help us. So we call on our best friend, but they can not be found. Next, some of us called on Jesus and he made a way out of no way.

When the one you deeply love die. Somehow it gives us the strength to make it through another day. It seems like everyone turned back on you. But there's always one person who stand before you. Who always lending a helping hand. With the power and strength to carry you the whole way through.

When life begin to get better, I changed my whole appearance. Now I have a new body, a new mind, and a new perspective in where I want to see myself. I'm like a tree that is planted by the water. I will stand firm. Nobody will be able to move me. With the roots gasping firmly to the foundation of all mankind.

Do not take my kindness for weakness. Where there is a time to play, I will joke with you. But I'm on a new level. I'm like a raging sea. Anything in my way will be demolished in seconds. So don't take life granted. How fast you was created you can be sweep away off of your feet.

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nikki78 commented on Many Obstacles

07-09-2009

this is food for thought, very interesting read keep it up

MariahRittel commented on Many Obstacles

05-15-2009

Excellent poem.

origionalmerlin commented on Many Obstacles

05-10-2009

good words nice form,, and we all create ourselves..

Rainz commented on Many Obstacles

05-05-2009

Good stuff mate. Very powerful. I am happy you have found your way.

optimistic commented on Many Obstacles

05-05-2009

Yes indeed I try not to let a day go by without knowing it could be my last excellent point great poem strong analogy

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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