Mary had a lamb

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    this cam from Mary had a little lamb
    poetry but i wrote it in my way to have a diffrent meaning such as the meaning as needed God and walking away such as in one person charicter.
    the mary little lamb talks about a school of kids and
    about how the lamb is not a loud in schools any more now the
    world is a mess and i agree with it,
    any ways this is a good poem
    i like it

    Mary had a lamb

    Mary had a little lamb,

    His home was white as snow.

    And every time Mary cried,

    The lamb was sure to show

    See there’s that speak in Mary’s eyes

    And there was a lamb,

    Who made her smile.

     He made her laugh and play,

    And sing hey all day

    Then one day Mary said good-bye

    For she had a change in mind

    Oh what must we do?

     To change Mary’s mind.

    Because with out this lamb

    Mary cries,

    It gets worse and worse each day,

    Because she thinks the lamb is so not cool.

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    XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on Mary had a lamb

    07-06-2009

    this is really good. i like the nursery rhyme lol cute. keep going.
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    IEnvyYou

    07/06/2009

    thank u i like it too

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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