Meant to be

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    Meant to be
    My mind is so jumbled.
    My thoughts are filled with words of a bundle.
    Their all connected.
    Like a wall my mind will be protected.
    I lie awake everynight.
    Just trying to make them right.
    But when I do they all point to you.
    What does this mean?
    All my thoughts I have seen.
    Will they come true?
    Will I ever see your eyes that are so blue?All I need is one hour or maybe less.
    To prove that we are blessed.
    Just to make you see.
    Because we are meant to be.

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    Lunesca commented on Meant to be

    07-21-2009

    this ones is good as well. i hope the best for you sweety
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    SaintStoney commented on Meant to be

    06-27-2009

    I really like your work thus far, I like how you keep it short, and yet you still get your point across. Nice.
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    sammia commented on Meant to be

    06-27-2009

    this is very touching and i feel what u feel as u were writing this its very good
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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