Meet Me In Atlanta

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    Meet Me In Atlanta




    In the market of trickery the swarms lie,

    like latte drinkers on a Paris street.

    One of them might brush beside you, "Pardone moi!"

    and reaching into your coat

    grab your stash of Traveler's Cheques

    and a half-pack of PrimaLux cigarettes.

    You have already cocked your eyebrow

    in a gesture of comaraderie,

    "Hey, it's ok, pal!"

    but the picker has moved on

    spying a Georgia Debutante

    at a few meters distant

    clicking away on her Nikon

    as thought the Eiffle Tower

    will disappear before

    she gets to the

    end of the roll.

    She is laughing

    and flipping

    a few pounds

    of honey hair

    sparkly lipgloss

    creating a beacon

    the thief sidles to

    as if by divine invitation.

    Her hand is on the camera

    but she has left her cell phone

    and her Palm Pilot unguarded

    in her backpack

    and his spider fingers

    pluck them from their side pocket

    as if brushing dust from a lapel.

    She won't know till it's much too late

    that these items have vanished

    (as has her new-found love of Paris)

    crying into an ancient handset

    on a phone with a DIAL forheavenssake

    to her mother in Van Nuys

    that she's been robbed and

    wants to come home.

    Mother placates as best she can

    and promises to meet her at

    Atlanta-Hartsford International Airport

    in three days time.

    They will return to their condo in Buckhead

    bushed and pale and needing showers

    only to open the door (which wasn't locked)

    and realise with heartbreak

    that trickery is indeed a market

    and a global one,

    at that.

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    charmlessman2d commented on Meet Me In Atlanta

    08-01-2011

    this reminds me of one of my favorite favorite movies.."Eternal Sunshine of The Spotless Mind" ever seen it? watch it , if you havne't. but yes, as far as your poem..really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good technique. its fresh and not overused.

    GaryJ commented on Meet Me In Atlanta

    05-17-2009

    I LIKE THIS ONE...

    namnoiz commented on Meet Me In Atlanta

    05-16-2009

    Beware the masses.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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