merky waters

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    merky waters


    i sit and look at the road ahead the only thing clear we all wind up dead blinded by the darkness i cant see the light every day is a up hiil battle addiction is strong motovation is weak im so tired i can hardly speak live to die and die to live i wish i had somthing to give so i sit all alone i just wish i had some one to pohone all i want to do is get high but then all i realy want is to feal joy why cant every one stop treating me like a boy i feal like a man but

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    jabotee commented on merky waters

    05-06-2009

    Faith in nothing else but yourself, is the difference between the life fulfilled and the life destroyed. Walk away from the darkness and into the light of your future. It will be one of the hardest things to do.

    artist4fun commented on merky waters

    05-06-2009

    love this poem!!! just wacth your spelling and puctuation.I also need to whatch my spelling and puctuation

    Raytonrue commented on merky waters

    05-06-2009

    This is in no ways philosophy more like self fulfilling prophesy. morbid and scattered with no clear picture . I rated it for the effort .

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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