Mindless

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    Mindless

    Now and then I've tried to hide
    my precious self
    under beds when it's late at night.
    All i can do is watch your spit
    dissolve my sand castle
    I so carefully built.
    I have tried to hear all that you've seen
    all that I was, am and will be.
    Now and then, It's all In my head.
    So now comes the time
    to pull all the plugs
    and hit rewind
    I know that your more than you show
    I show you more than I am
    Now and then its all in my head
    Sometimes 5+5 don't equal ten.

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    Sopradiction commented on Mindless

    05-16-2009

    Ahh- very open to skepticism- i like the sense of falsity in this write... and the imagery of trying to find truth if i understood correctly-uniquely well written i must say...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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