Missing You

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    Missing You

    Thank you for loving me
    Thanks for caring
    And for touching me with
    Those eyes so daring
    Wish you were here now
    For me to hold
    But thats a pain in my heart
    That will never grow old.
    I wish I could see you
    One last time
    But it helps to know
    That for a while you were mine
    Youve gone to a place
    So far away,
    And now that you're gone,
    We have a baby on the way
    I found out the day
    After you died
    And that pain is just
    Too much to hide
    I try to be happy
    For the babys sake
    Although it still doesnt
    Ease my heartache
    I pretend that it
    Doesnt hurt anymore
    While deep inside
    I am still fighting the war

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    finding4ever commented on Missing You

    08-08-2009

    talk about a beautiful struggle, i like your style and the deepth, while reading you exsperience mixed emotions...it is a very touching piece (finger snaps)!

    optimistic commented on Missing You

    07-18-2009

    Great poem interesting ending, and a great write.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Missing You

    07-18-2009

    sad that we never know what we have and how special it is until its gone gone gone

    Phoenix9 commented on Missing You

    07-17-2009

    very well written and sad, sorry for your loss, God bless

    WinterFrost commented on Missing You

    07-12-2009

    Well again your poetry tag sums it up fully. winter

    jensworldtour03

    07/12/2009

    thank you for reading my poem

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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