MISSING YOU

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    MISSING YOU

    YOUR MEMORIES OF US RUNS THROUGH MY VEINS, KNOWING OUR SOULS WERE MATES TO BE.
    I WISH I STILL HAD YOU. I LOVED THE WAY YOU HAD ONCE LOVED ME.
    THE SOUND OF YOUR VOICE RUNS THROUGH MY MIND AS IF YOU WERE STILL MINE..
    YOUR GREENS EYES THAT HYPNOTIZED ME, ONLY THOSE EYES HAVE SEEN THE SOUL THAT IS
    INSIDE OF ME.

    I NEVER NEEDED TO HIDE OR LIE TO YOU, FOR WE WERE ONE AND THERE WAS NOTHING TO HIDE
    FOR WE WERE TWO SOULS TOGETHER INSIDE. YOU TOOK MY HEART RIGHT FROM THE START, OUR HEARTS INNER TWINED TOGETHER LIKE A VINE...

    BUT THAT WAS WHEN YOU WERE MINE AND I WAS YOURS, AS OUR HEARTS AND SOULS WE'RE AS ONE BUT NOW THATS ALL GONE. SINCE YOU'VE BEEN GONE EVERYTHING HAS BEEN WRONG...
    I WISH YOU WERE HERE TO TELL ME IN MY EAR THAT YOU WERE WRONG AND YOU WONT BE GONE.... 

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    inkmaster commented on MISSING YOU

    01-09-2011

    Nice ....Thanks .....I liked it keep writing and keeping it real.......me

    niikidavies

    01/09/2011

    thank you.... do you know who that is about???.. did you really like it???

    inkmaster

    01/09/2011

    yes I know!!!It was cool make the writing a little bigger it s on the place where you post the poem right above where you write it along with a spell check and different fonts..........write on....jl

    niikidavies

    01/09/2011

    so u know it's about you?? and i have many about you and yes kevin you know i love him but there is still a bond between us that can never be broken and memories that wont be n dont want to ever be forgotten.... thank you... okay i will make the writing bigger and thank you for your help and input... love n peace me... oh i see your not on much lately you better keep checking for me n what about the big D with us are we or what??

    BrokenHeart2009 commented on MISSING YOU

    01-07-2011

    I like the use of metaphores and imagery to describe your emotions and let the words flow like a story:)

    niikidavies

    01/07/2011

    thank you i write in many ways it's just whatever comes at me at that time... although this one is personal to me it is what has happen to me so it means alot to me that you like it thank you!!! tat2lady nakeita

    TinaStevens commented on MISSING YOU

    01-07-2011

    Reading this made memories fade back made me remember the man i lost to a car reck.... but i relly like this

    niikidavies

    01/07/2011

    thank you very much!!! we just grew apart n we're still talk'n but it makes the hurt come back!!! I AM SO SORRY FOR YOUR LOST !!!!! I will keep you in my thoughts n prayers.... Nakeita tat2lady

    TinaStevens

    01/07/2011

    Thanks

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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