Mojave Dessert

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    Mojave Dessert

    His swirling curled words drive me in,
    like a blind woman in night vision goggles,
    absolutely no depth perception,
    in a desert of daisy's,
    in a whirlwind of heat,
    waves rushing the temperature just to make a mark,
    like the coyote makes on the scared soldier,
    a cringe at the sight of bloody teeth,
    the white knives that dig into a fresh molded bag of chocolate trash.
    So scared, the soldier grazes its wet coat with touches of sour.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Mojave Dessert

    01-19-2011

    hmm.... nice writing.. hits kinda close to home in one aspect:)

    noregrets21 commented on Mojave Dessert

    02-09-2010

    love the description and feeling in this poem. beautifully written

    lonewolf commented on Mojave Dessert

    02-07-2010

    a little erotic, with a touch of mystery. nicely written

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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