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  • Lost Love

    more then

     why they took you i already know
    you left me here with nothing to show
    you told me you loved me and YOU said forever
    but now my heart beats with out you
    i really dont know if i can go on
    i will do the best i can
    in hope that some day i will see you agien
    and it really will be forever
    i hope you know i miss you
    more then ever

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    lonewolf commented on more then

    11-29-2009

    i think this poem is about your daughter, but in the third line you appear to be talking about a guy. other than this uncertainty, i liked the poem.
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    lostsoul17

    12/03/2009

    it was to a guy i was with that went to jail.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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