Mothers

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  • Sadness

    Mothers

    Hitting the fan,
    Spinning out of control.
    Anger hazes the air,
    tears have no phaze in
    the mixed drink created
    by words and body language.

    Most sounds are over
    rated yet there is always
    the select few that will
    rape your ears, and
    sears the sicken soul.

    Yes these sounds take
    there toul and crack the
    back of all living humans. Tears,
    tears, tears, scream from the face.

    Eruptions, explotions,
    expose the instinc to
    fly over the fire created
    by the raping of sounds.

    Let us all be deaf and free.
    Heal the ill-soul and
    don't justify the sounds that
    you made, you caused the soul to
    be battered and bruised.

    Black and blue, and sickly
    yellow taints this old soul
    and wilts like flowers in fall. If
    you could only see how you
    destryed this ice swan,
    with your dragon breath.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Mothers

    03-17-2009

    not bad but you need to work on your structur (alot). not tryingto be mean just trying to help. try to make your words flow off the lines.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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