Merrilyn’s Profile

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  • Age: 40
  • Location: Moses Lake, WA
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: United States
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I was wondering if you guys could read some of my poems and give me some feed back so i can see if i need to change anything, i realize that there are some spelling errors, thats cause i submited them before i read them carefully enough obviously. I love this site and there are some awsome ppl on here i enjoy reading your poems and i love writing them as well thanks for all your input and hope to read more of your guys and gals work in the future. THANK YOU

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Jolly profile comment

03-27-2009

Sorry I don't respond quickly, I'm preparing for a move to Germany and between passports and crap I have to do for my dog I've been busier than a one legged man in an ass kicking contest. How you doing? LOL, within the hours I'll have a happy poem posted, you should check it out. It'll be called "Samantha"

Skies profile comment

03-26-2009

HI Merrilyn, NICE TO HAVE YOU ON BOARD. THANKS FOR STOPPING BY:) HAVE THE WEEKEND OFF, SO WILL SPEND SOME TIME READING TOMORROW:) AGAIN, WELCOME:)

Jolly profile comment

03-23-2009

I have happiness, just not much. I take full advantadge of what little I do have however. My poetry is a vent, as well as a verbal assault. Don't think I'm just depressed, though I appreciate the concern, lol. Have a good day.

pocketofdreams6 profile comment

03-11-2009

Thanks for the request, I will read some more of your poetry when I get some spare time :)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Merrilyn’s Poems (13)

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Dark embrace 11
Warning XXX 7
A husbands heart 4
Complete 3
Shades of Grey 5
From sad to sober 9
Life 1
I wish 2
Our first kiss "Stopped Time" 5
Happiness Is 2
Thoughts of you 4
Simple Truth 2
Oh Sweet Child 8