Merrilyn’s Profile

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  • Age: 38
  • Location: Moses Lake, WA
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: United States
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I was wondering if you guys could read some of my poems and give me some feed back so i can see if i need to change anything, i realize that there are some spelling errors, thats cause i submited them before i read them carefully enough obviously. I love this site and there are some awsome ppl on here i enjoy reading your poems and i love writing them as well thanks for all your input and hope to read more of your guys and gals work in the future. THANK YOU

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Jolly profile comment

03-27-2009

Sorry I don't respond quickly, I'm preparing for a move to Germany and between passports and crap I have to do for my dog I've been busier than a one legged man in an ass kicking contest. How you doing? LOL, within the hours I'll have a happy poem posted, you should check it out. It'll be called "Samantha"

Skies profile comment

03-26-2009

HI Merrilyn, NICE TO HAVE YOU ON BOARD. THANKS FOR STOPPING BY:) HAVE THE WEEKEND OFF, SO WILL SPEND SOME TIME READING TOMORROW:) AGAIN, WELCOME:)

Jolly profile comment

03-23-2009

I have happiness, just not much. I take full advantadge of what little I do have however. My poetry is a vent, as well as a verbal assault. Don't think I'm just depressed, though I appreciate the concern, lol. Have a good day.

pocketofdreams6 profile comment

03-11-2009

Thanks for the request, I will read some more of your poetry when I get some spare time :)

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Merrilyn’s Poems (13)

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Dark embrace 11
Warning XXX 7
A husbands heart 4
Complete 3
Shades of Grey 5
From sad to sober 9
Life 1
I wish 2
Our first kiss "Stopped Time" 5
Happiness Is 2
Thoughts of you 4
Simple Truth 2
Oh Sweet Child 8