Moving Waters

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    This poem is really random. I just thought of it. LOL! I dont know if it is any good.

    Moving Waters
    Moving Waters

    Waving.. then crash against the shore.

    Dreams like tsunamis...
    crashing down on the little hope.

    Economic troubles like rivers,
    flowing easily then stopped up in a second,
    leaving families quenching for thirst.

    Moving waters flow, 
    the secrets they may show, 
    the things unknown,
    the things that happen,
    that rattle every bone.

    Moving waters,
    Waving... then crash against the shore. 

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    Dreamer123 commented on Moving Waters

    07-08-2009

    This is awesome sun24star! I like the way it's formatted. It's like a story/ poem it's great And tsunamis's do crush hope if you don't believe i get that hidden message. It's a message that is secret beyond the poem Amazing :D
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    sun24star

    07/08/2009

    Thanks so much :) I didnt really like it though.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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