Mujer (Girl)

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Mujer (Girl)

Mujer
The dress on her bones
Made it so apparent
The world closer than it is
Little ants tickled
Building castles
The passage
With its intricate meanings
Shall you help her decide which to lift?
Maybe then those pair of
Pale thighs shall spread and
Flow like a river
Maybe a blow on all the candles
In one take,
Time would be
A happy friend

©2008 vjam

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jaoa commented on Mujer (Girl)

02-11-2009

Blushing heels— rain comes trickling down and space becomes a soaked brisk-ling against the glossy grey of the morning earth and I wish I was it, contemplating the valley of your verdant apex ©2009 j.a.o.a.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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