My Angel

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    My Angel

    An angel came to me

    One touch he healed me

    One kiss he restored me

    I was lost but one word

    Uttered from his lips

    Guided me to salvation

    One Look from his soft eyes

    Made me feel like a goddess

    But when he had helped me

    One step away from me

    Gave me confidence

    But when he staied with me

    I learned trust and faithfulness

    Then when he became mortal for me

    I learned love and devotion

    And when we had our first child

    I learned happiness and peace

    But when they left

    I felt loneliness and pain

    But than my angel came to me

    And I felt whole again

    That angel was you

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    Stanforth commented on My Angel

    06-18-2009

    I understood the gist of it but you need to work on spelling. Also you used. "but" and "when" way too often.

    Azceltic

    01/27/2010

    to be fair I was 15 when I wrote this...

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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