[My command

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    [My command

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    Your wish is my command. I work hard to satisfy you because you work hard to provide your love to me. Wedding day vowels aren’t enough to express or thank you for what you do and who you are. My vowels would last forever and a day. Eternity caries our future in its arms. Because I will love you for a lifetime.

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    Spacer commented on [My command

    01-29-2009

    Simple thought...It was more of a exclamtion...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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