MY DOTCOM

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    • cloudburst
    • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

    MY DOTCOM

    Look, what I have learned, in my last lesson ….

    Dot,, that comes with so many coms.

     

    I have become, a Spider who just lost in his own web,

    So many flies, flashes and hide, leaving trail of musk and joy,

     

    What the evening, that was, when that lovely girl came and said,

    I was lost, you just found me out, but you have to pay, on my dotcom.

     

    Last night, the million that I won, got lost,

    Because, I could not pay the shipment charges on that dotcom.

     

    One day when I inquired my son, what’s new?

    So innocently, had he replied, peace dotcom.

     

     

    With slip of the mouse, I sent a matrimonial invitation,

    To my beloved wife on some dotcom.

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    blanket commented on MY DOTCOM

    10-20-2009

    you made me laugh heartily, which is a nearly impossible task...one typo .....cloud for could...of is an intentional allusion to your name? PM me and let me know how you are doing in Pakistan ....I am curious...it so turbulent there atm.... great poem.....smiles....blanky

    cloudburst

    10/20/2009

    and you made me feel great...thanks

    TamiG76 commented on MY DOTCOM

    05-24-2009

    Zia, Zia, Zia, What am I to do with you? Lmao!!! Okay, Okay, you made me laugh but can you please tell me what made you write this one? Lol. Wishing you peace and happiness- Tamara

    cloudburst

    06/29/2009

    My dear Tamara… thank you once again for liking my humble effort, and sorry again for replying you late… I wonder how my lines got some bodies attention like you.. this will help me, go a long way… to tell you frankly most of it, in this poem are true experiences of mine… regards and best wishes from, Zia

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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