These Letters

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  • Friendship
    • cloudburst
    • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

    These Letters

    These small little litters that hold us tight, for which we wait,
    To stir our lives;

    I felt like some boy, when I looked at the sky,
    To create your figure in mist and fog;

    I do want to say, so many things to you,
    So as to listen, stories from you;

    But for sure we live in the realities of this world,
    Some time doctor and other time friends will take us apart;

    These small letters must hold us tight

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    TamiG76 commented on These Letters

    05-22-2009

    heart wrenching and poignant. Hauntingly beautiful. Good flow as well as great direction. Overall Zia, I really liked it.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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