My Dumb Sense

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    My Dumb Sense


    You are like a

    Dumb sense for me

    That every day and every moment

    It is going to become

    Deeper and deeper than past

    I don’t know!

    I must celebrate its

    Or that sit down

    Weeping and crying

    Like spring’s clouds

    ?Is this love

    Or imagination

    I don’t know

    Everything that is

    It is going to be finished

    Expensive for me

    To price of my administering

    Perhaps

    As I’m virgin

    It has seen

    Very hard and difficult

    Surly you understand

    What I’m saying

    As to this sense

    Has come once near you

    And if

    It become repeat for you

    You don’t pay attention its

    Just as now

    What ever I become more eager to you

    Instead of you are doing numeric lines your writing

    Lower and lower till frontier of chat

    Same low and transient speech

    Only difference between me and you

    Is this that

    You like to come near

    And I love durability

    .

    .

    .

    If a day stand your front

    I will seem like a born dumb



    Shabnam

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    origionalmerlin commented on My Dumb Sense

    04-26-2009

    (blessings)the tone and feelingd transcent this limited things we call language and culture please if possible write in both your own language and even in english at same time all language limits us all anyways for no language is pure as the emotions, hops, dreams but still as writers and poets we seek in vain with nets of language to hold the eternal perhaps it is a mercy that we fail, byt still it is aknowledging beauty and the higher reaches perhaps all someday will look in the direct

    shabnamshirvani

    06/02/2009

    thanks for your scrupulous comment on my poem

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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