My Eyes

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    My Eyes
    Look into my eyes what do you see, Do you see sadness?, or do you see me. Do you see the hope I have. Do you see the honesty. Look into my dark brown eyes if you dare. You'll find love and joy there, you will see good and bad times. You'll see the bad dreams I had all the time. You'll see the people I believed. You will see how many times I was decieved. You will see the love I was giving. Do you see how I hunger for that special love. Love from a special person. Do you see that burning passion. Do you see the promises that were said. You should see the great dreams that lies ahead.

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    peacefully commented on My Eyes

    04-08-2009

    don't understand this rating system. I gave you a 10. I thought this poem was good because I loved the thought of someone looking into the eyes to really see who we are. We are a lot of things and you are a poet.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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