My Hawaii

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    My Hawaii

    My Hawaii is crying,
    My Hawaii is calling,
    My Hawaii is dying,
    My Hawaii has fallen.

    Can you tell me what comes to mind in paradise?
    I’m sure it is something beautiful, something nice.
    Beautiful waves, covered in froth,
    Seagulls above, seagulls aloft

    The sand would be exquisite, pure white,
    The sun would always cast the perfect light
    Butterflies would float close enough to touch
    Of course, like Hawaii, never close enough

    The food would be delicious,
    Yet somehow oddly nutritious
    It would make you always want to come back for more
    And the locals would open a huge, deluxe food store

    Downtown would be small,
    One million people, in all
    You would always see friendly, smiling faces
    You would be able to leave your purse alone in places

    Trust would be like the sun,
    There would be plenty for everyone
    Would be, could be,
    Unfortunately

    This is not my Hawaii.

    The beaches are beautiful; the coral is colorful,
    Yet something just isn’t right.
    The exotic fish are disappearing, (not very endearing)
    But it puts everything in a different light.

    The traffic is terrible; everyone is ‘special’;
    The fumes reach skinny tendrils up to the sky
    As our world is melting, our contribution is crucial
    To as why our planet will die.

    Unless… Unless…
    Perhaps we still have a chance.
    If we all decide we don’t want our world to die,
    Perhaps we still have a chance.

    But the road will be hard, full of skeptics,
    Who will only believe our efforts are for
    Nothing, because in the end our antics will only be good for
    Our destruction.

    However, until then,
    We must fight.
    Because Mother Earth
    Has condemned my Hawaii.

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    dawn7191 commented on My Hawaii

    12-27-2011

    This poem brought me to tears. I've never been to hawaii but this poem made me feel as though it was My hawaii. I felt the loss. You are a wonderful writter.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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