my life..

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my life..

i feel death, i feel death today.
i feel death, i feel it coming my way.
how can you feel death when death is unknown?
yet i feel death, i feel death in my bones...
death came out to play with me, but i said no death, not today...
i have this life inside you see, and it says No, tell death to go away.. it's a curious side, that i have only gleamed, that if i die it remains ungleaned... so i can't torture with death today cause life is love & here to stay... but death has come, & its come, to do away.. with my life, that which is here to stay...

'I will never leave you, nor forsake you'...Heb 13:5

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starfox115 commented on my life..

01-27-2010

cool. Great words but you haven't type it well here. i know this is not the way you write it. You ues death as a person but theres nothing to learn from this poem. I will never leave you nor forsake you? are you saying death is always here or god wont leave us? we all will die in the end. nothing to learn and remember ppl do not gravitate to death poems much unless its lots of creativity. think about it

Starrz

01/28/2010

lol.. ok, i see your point. i am not a poet. just fooling around with this.. that particular poem got me a B+ in high school.. i just thought i'd submit it.. I am way past H.S. age.. so i guess that is kind of old school.. thanks for your comment..

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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