My Love

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    My Love
    I see the ocean in your eyes my love
    I smell the perfume on your shirt my love
    I hear your thoughts with every word you speak my love
    I hold your hand with every step I take my love
    But, now you're gone and I miss you always
    I have a new love who I see every day
    And who is this love?
    My love is my diary.

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    vincenzo commented on My Love

    06-28-2009

    i am captured with the essense of the poem. short and straight to the point. i think i've now discovered your style is brevity. when i rated your first poem, i commented on the shortness, but now i think i enjoy your style. good work. keep it up. you may wish to read my work "Rendezvous"
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