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  • Sadness

    Untitled

    Life is a roller coaster ride
    it has a lot of people in iy
    And they don't know what to
    Expect and the ride goes up and down
    And it may seem scary at times
    But if you let go, it can sometimes
    be fun, but then all of a sudden
    It's over.

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    vincenzo commented on Untitled

    06-28-2009

    good theme. let's live life as it comes. i think the poem is a bit short though. you can do theme on a mofre elaborate tone. it is too good a theme to render so short... good metaphor. i think i can also excuse the lenght of the poem because it encapsulates the ephemeral nature of life itself. life is too short to waste time on worries. good job

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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