My Love

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    My Love
    When I First Saw You...

    I Was Afraid To Meet You...

    When I First Met You...

    I Was Afraid To Kiss You...

    When I First Kissed You...

    I Was Afraid To Love You...

    But Now I Love You ...

    I'm Afraid To Lose You...

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    CreatorX1 commented on My Love

    05-29-2009

    Simple and to the point! I've been writing for 29 years, mostly lyrics, but I like it. I would have used the word "That" on line before the last, "But Now That I Love You..". Good job.
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