My promise to you

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My promise to you

When I can't hear your voice where will I turn
What happens when I roll over at night and your touch
and scent is what I yearn
What happens when I forget and the kids need something
and I yell out "babe your turn"
When I'm having a bad day who will bother to be concerned
I guess in life sometimes you get burned
I'll never find another you is what I've learned
I'll always be missing a piece of myself and 
inside could never move on
My heart will bleed constantly and I'll feel as if my mind is gone
Always pictured you in my life never thought I would be alone
And you would be gone
I'll vision different points in our relationship in every song
Feeling like there's something better I could have done
Remembering your strength and how you always strived to be #1
That will be the stories I tell our sons
The strength that I watched you have is what will help me stay strong
My life I promise you is dedicated to being a better Person and Mom

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cousinsoren commented on My promise to you

03-05-2010

THis poem is poignant with the pian and longing of a widowed woman who loves her departed husband. A very touching poem to which must return to write a proper Appreciation, I promise. .Such pain, sorrow and need expressed with much fervency is still rare. My rating for sorrow so well expressed is 10x10.

TyMartin

04/16/2010

Thank u very much it was exactly how I was feelin and do feel now. I included this poem in his obituary!!

nena53 commented on My promise to you

09-19-2009

Tyanne, Absolutely, beautiful

TyMartin

09/19/2009

Thanki you so much

wildpendigus commented on My promise to you

06-10-2009

I really like this poem it shows how much talent you have I would turn this poem into a nice song and it may possibly be a hit form my stand point I have some poems I'd like you to see Also I was a U,S. Army Ranger grecowong@yahoo.com

TyMartin

07/10/2009

Thank you I really appreciate that one of my goals is to be able to write a song....

TyMartin

07/10/2009

Thank you I really appreciate that one of my goals is to be able to write a song....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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My promise to you 3
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