My Salvation

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    My Salvation

    I was sitting here wondering and my mind started pondering there's a storm on the inside of you why hasn't it started thundering, and then my paper begin to cooperate with my pencil and it felt good like I was at praise and worship and the holy ghost was using the symbols.
    Oh well as I continue my stomach is hungry but I don't know what my mind has on the menue with my words flowing so fluently it feels like i've opened up a new venue.
    You know like a new chapter and right now i don't know if its headed for triumph or disaster. All I know is whatever happened started to happen faster.
    So I continue writing my pen and my paper mad like they fighting I don't know what the experience was but it was really exciting.
    MY SALVATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Mariam66 commented on My Salvation

    04-16-2009

    Very nice!!

    cottonluv commented on My Salvation

    03-30-2009

    love this good work mr.bono

    TERESA0519 commented on My Salvation

    03-26-2009

    Amen!

    Chi commented on My Salvation

    03-24-2009

    Salvation ...............a good place to go........and know .........and write about. I rate this poem a 25. Chi

    janetdawson commented on My Salvation

    03-24-2009

    i like this one alot

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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