My Shadow and Me

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    Thinking outloud

    My Shadow and Me

    Never let your Shadow
    Be the only company you see
    It's soon you'll be bored of it
    And want it to leave
    Make the effort to let others in
    A fresh start with new faces,
    Your chance for a new entrance
    Then they will notice
    What you never allowed to be seen
    Your presence and good heart
    Will be remembered in others
    When the time comes,
    That it's your turn to leave
    Your Shadow won't be the only
    Sad face to see you set free

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    FlowerGirl commented on My Shadow and Me

    10-20-2009

    Di//le, Hello, I Like This Poem...Very Interesting Thought. I Also Believe That A Little Bit Of Us Is And In Sum Cases Will Always Be A Part of Those We've Left Behind From Our Past.. Either Days or Years Ago...And Whom, We Presently Interact With...As Well. You Given Us All Something To Look And Ponder Upon. Thank You For Sharing!! Flower Girl,
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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