MY TRUE LOVE

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    MY TRUE LOVE
    Amongs thorns and broken glasses i walked
    Searching for a true love
    Deep ocean and high mountains i climbed
    Looking for whom to trust

    Silver and gold i saw but i abandoned
    Cause i felt they are not grace for me
    In the middle of a beautiful garden
    Surrounded by a thick wall you were

    This thick wall i courageously brought down
    The beautiful garden i passed through
    And saw you crowned with perfection
    And your image plays the role

    And your beauty wears the crown
    Now my heart consumes in you
    The rips of my heart
    The succulent idol of my heart

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    ccslim commented on MY TRUE LOVE

    01-26-2009

    Subtle influence.I feel like there's something left out though!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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