my worst fiers

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    my worst fiers
    my worst fires when i was growing up
    i did not want to get raped any more
    it lead me to hate and hate even more
    why didit happen to me why did it happen at all
    cant we all be friends or are we suppose to hate
    i dont care for people who rape others
    because i have been raped before

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    Tempestlady commented on my worst fiers

    08-23-2009

    Rape is about power over another. Rapists dont think abut causing others to hate. All of the women I am close with in my family and friend circles,( except for one handicapped one) Have been raped or molested at some time in their life. It is so prevalent! We need more awareness. Nice modern piece which could be used to help the cause of rape awareness. Watch the spelling, but the message was clear and necessary. Write on. Your a survivor, now learn and prevent it from ever happening to you again. Always call 911.... and a self defense class would help your confidence, and reduce victimization. Write on....
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    Tomarra commented on my worst fiers

    02-26-2009

    If this has truely happened to you, then we have somethin in common. I like the poem by the way.
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