N 2 ya LUV

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    N 2 ya LUV


    "Splash". in i go,already in over my head
    which way is up i'll never know
    All my senses are over fed
    The light is tricky, it's everywhere
    in which direction do i swim?
    can no longer hold my breath in here
    I'm about to breath you in.

    my chest in pain,my thumping heart,my brains and lungs on fire
    I blow out air and deep inhail then swell with my desires.
    More emotion than i can bear,infinties the way
    I cant see clear,im drifting away
    are you still there,what do i say?
    we are only a pair, do i pass or play
    is this the heat of fear,or a soulfilet?
    I follow my heart and breech the suface
    while treding i glance around
    I was only in a pool of ya "LUV"
    no way that i could've drowned.

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    anniebloom commented on N 2 ya LUV

    04-24-2009

    you must have soooooooo fallen in love lol. well in this case, if you loved one of my poem, "the gardener's flower" you may also love the others too. like "the heat of desire" and "the sense of scents"

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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