Next!!!!

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    Next!!!!

    Why did i set myself up for the woo-woo, I knew all along that all you wanted was sex boo-boo.  You wanted to see the freak in me. Could've kept it real.  Maybe I would have showed you a few tricks.  You're gonna miss these juicy big lips.  Now I get it that's why you were being so nice. U were trying to slide in between these thick luscious caramel thighs. I am not suprised, disappointed, but oh well! You ain't that last brother who thought he was fixin to get some tail. But let me tell you something I am woman longing for more than just ten inches thrusting in and out of me.  I need someone with stability, A man who wants to cover me, his first concern is my well-being. His first question is does she have? His second question to is what does she need. So I  say to you" Cut- Next Please!". Your audition is over and the lines you read to me were tired and this is to let you know from Preshus not Trump Baby you're "fired"  no wonder I hesistated; to give up the ass. You see a real woman like me has class, she waits for the man that will give her what she needs, so let me say it to you again Cut-Next Please!

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    slimgoodwoody commented on Next!!!!

    01-16-2012

    Great poem! Humor can often be used to share an experience with others and you did it well! I really enjoyed the pace of it!

    CraigStyle commented on Next!!!!

    12-30-2011

    Smiling right now, I can tell you have a big personality and great since of humor as well.....Major clowning goes on even during rough times. I believe through I a lot of crazy times in our life we should never forget to laugh.especially when individuals are straight comedy.keep writing and being the Woman that you are.

    optimistic commented on Next!!!!

    12-21-2010

    Ha! Ha! this is funny what a way to lose a guy who really was only there for one thing.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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